Website redraft

We decided that our Maria website still needed further changes and would not fulfill the criteria as it currently stood. I made several changes throughout the redraft.

1. Cutting down pages

I thought that the current site had too many pages and this made navigating it needlessly complicated. Most pop music websites (such as Kesha's) utilize a more minimalistic theme and do not have multiple pages. Additionally, the number of pages resulted in a 'more' button with only two options which was strange and awkward.

Before:

weird and awkward

After:

much better

2. Making text clearer

 Some of the text was not clear enough due to the colour, I fixed this by adding semi-transparent black boxes around it. This also made it look more interesting and stylish.

Before:

Note how difficult it is to read some of the text


After:

Now the text is all perfectly visible

3. Changing fonts

There were too many different fonts on the website, whereas we had been advised to never have more than two. I changed almost all of the fonts to 'open sans' to keep a more formulaic look to the website.

The majority of text is now in either Open Sans 19px or DIN Next Light

I also made various other minor changes including tidying up a few parts of the website that didn't look right, adding hyperlinks to the news page and making the pages more symmetrical. We discussed the possibility of changing the background image as we have received feedback that it is an unflattering image and that an out of focus shot would not be a good idea. I hope to address this in the future.

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What other artists do you think this act is similar to?

  1. nicki minai
  2. Jessie J Ariana Grande and Nicki Minaj in Bang Bang
  3. grande,
  4. take previous comment back - this girl is 100% the best looking
  5. 07713237372 - My number for you and the actresses
  6. taylor swift candy (a stripper)
  7. Ariana Grande, Katy Perry, Demi Lovato
  8. Tori Black
  9. nelly Fertado
  10. j lo
  11. not sure - I'm not the target audience maybe Nicky Minaj
  12. Mia Pia Looks similar to M.I.A


Who do you think this act would appeal to?


  1. Teenage boys
  2. Teenage boys
  3. late teenage to early adult men
  4. ME!!!!
  5. GUYS
  6. boys
  7. young girls and guys
  8. Teenage males
  9. ages 15+
  10. teenagers
  11. Teenage boys
  12. Teenage Girls and Boys


What does this video tell you about this act?


  1. male gaze
  2. They are sold on sex appeal
  3. sexy, attracting male audience
  4. She'll top the charts instantly
  5. attractive girls
  6. very "free"
  7. she is a pop singer
  8. It doesnt tell me much about the band
  9. She is very fun, and exciting! This video gives the impression that she would be great in concert or live as her song is upbeat, and fun!
  10. quite provocative
  11. Dance/pop orientated, aiming at a mainstream audience
  12. That the artist is young and sold on their sex appeal


Do you think this is a single artist or a girl band?


  1. singl artist
  2. Single artist
  3. single artist
  4. She may not be a single artist, but hopefully she's a single woman: From two lovely AVAILABLE lads: 07950551357 - I'm the challah challah boy x
  5. single
  6. single
  7. single artist
  8. Single artist as she was the only one singing
  9. This is confusing, as I originally thought this was a solo artist as the majority of her website is dominated around her, however the first image on her website is of her and a group of girls. It is not clear whether it is a girl or boy.
  10. I was confused by this as her digipack was just her yet the website has the 5 girls on it
  11. solo
  12. The digipak suggests that it is a single artist However the first page of the website and the video makes it seem that it could be a girl band 

What do you like most about any of the products?


  1. website
  2. I like the choice of actors, and the photoshoots being well done and look really nice.
  3. very appealing to a large target audience
  4. Star image PERFECTION!!
  5. website
  6. the actress
  7. the colour scheme and its very chic - the front of the home page needs to change the picture of the girls could be better
  8. Dont know
  9. I love the digi pack! The colour scheme, the font, the anamation of the eye which fits perfectly with the album title 'eye on you'. I like that she has made a limited edition in gold.
  10. the digipack is very classy and current
  11. Digipak is great, not sure about website as it appears to be a girl band but the digipak suggests otherwise.
  12. The digipak looks very proffesional, and the video is good because of the fast paced editing